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Unheard
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:56:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Oh, the things I'd love to tell you
but I cannot speak out
I try and try
yet you do not hear
I pour my heart out
while you shut your ears
I've been through this before
here I am again
wasting my breath
pouring out my feelings
that always go unheard
JENNA
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2004-01-12 13:56:11]
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Re: Unheard
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:02:22 PM AEST
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Very touching! Sad to hear you're unable to say these words to someone :s Continue writing!! :D
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Re: Unheard
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:40:08 PM AEST
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| Ok. I really liked this one. It held power to it. I almost want to say this is one of the best ones of yours I have read. I just like how it was done. Very very good indeed. |
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Re: Unheard
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:35:08 PM AEST
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this i can so relate to on a daily basis wish it were'nt so great poem
michelle |
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