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The Path
Contributed by
mystERA
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:32:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Movement centres my existence
But I was forced to stop, this instance,
When I met a dark wild stranger
Who baffles me in my anger
Of loosing my trace, my pace, my face
Burned by the flame ablaze.
The smoke made me choke
The words hidden in my throat
Poured out from somewhere between my ears
With another bonfire of tears.
As hot molten lava leaks
In confusion the valley It seeks.
Sheltered in the caves in the hill
Dropping drops dropped until
The lantern reduced to ambers
As the moving body remembers
How it left the stranger untouched
Who now is no longer camouflaged.
And in the water I saw my reflection
And seeing the result of my desolation,
Decided to take this route in my life,
While keeping the spark within alive
With only a match to light my way,
Followed the stranger…walked away…
Till I arrive where I belong – Home.
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Re: The Path
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:44:00 PM AEST
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Oh! Very very vivid imagery!! Bit confusing to understand! You sound like Dante (lol you know what I'm refaring to) Welcome here! El!!
Impressive description! Want to see more poems!! (And help me to understand bhehe)
Anne ;)) |
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Re: The Path
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:58:40 AM AEST
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welcome to YPDC!! Enjoyable read my friend it was at times almost haunting. To me I may see a crossroad in your life is that right??
michelle |
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