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Conflicting with myself
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:31:35 PM in AEST
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I fall into the darkness
And into all the lies,
I'm seeing all the people who I love and I despise,
Many conflicting images swirl inside my head,
And I sit and cry in the middle,
Wishing I was dead.
I'm sick of all the terror,
All the anger and the lies,
All my childish hopes of happiness,
Are lost into the sky,
Disappearing into eternity,
No truth here, only lies,
I just sit and cry in the middle,
Wishing I would die.
I really want to be happy,
But still want to be me,
But I feel so all alone now,
Is there nobody else that sees?
I'm just sitting on the floor and crying over me
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:33:41 PM AEST
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:47:50 PM AEST
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Wow, very sad! Understand what you meant. Be strong! Continue writing! ;)
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:02:18 PM AEST
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| i under stand you! even if no one else does, because i feel the same pain as you. (my name is deathdrop) |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by LiveTheDream on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:06:19 PM AEST
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Well done hun! This is brill and i myself have felt the same way too
xxxxx |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:36:24 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, I'm 42 years old and you just described how I feel most of the time.
Incredible!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:05:09 PM AEST
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Your poem made me want to cry. It was a great poem, the flow etc but it was incredibly sad and I believe came from your deepest parts. Writing is a great way to vent, please hang in there...
Kie |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:27:04 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem with alot of emotion. I liked it. Sometimes you have to make choices albeit hard choices. |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:40:14 PM AEST
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this is how i feel right now!...it really does hurt.
good write
luv always |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:02:01 PM AEST
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| I can so relate to this, at times. It's very expressive, Phil. The last line is especially poignant. Blessings. |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:23:56 PM AEST
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| this was a good first post, phil. i can see that youve really grown as a writer, but since you started off this well, you only could become more brilliant with use of expression. and as for the concept, hopefully there is no more darkness to fall into... |
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 04:23:44 PM AEST
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Very delicate write here, not very difficult to understand, or perceive, sometimes we can better locate ourselves in those subtle moments, at war within our souls. RL
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Re: Conflicting with myself
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:22:16 AM AEST
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Desperation so well penned. Know that I'm always here.
Take care,
David |
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