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seeing through you
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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im breaking through your soft exterior now
finding the real you
i want to do you for fraud
im seeing the real you more and more
now i know your nasty tone
it wont ever be just you and me alone
the real you is breaking through
now i truly know you
you stole my hopes
they were took with your spiteful words
all this pain is enough to end my world
im just a little girl
why is nothing what it seems?
why cant you be honest with me?
when am i going to fly free?
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2004-01-12 13:09:33]
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Re: seeing through you
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:20:02 PM AEST
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Re: seeing through you
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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| I like how you wrote this. It was a very good write. I like the words and the feeling behind it. |
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