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Goodbye
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 11:47:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears come to my eyes,
Your dead and not alive,
I wish you saw the lies,
I wish you could survive,
But now your gone,
Fallen to grace,
And my pains begun,
Something I have to face
I'll miss you forever and ever,
I cry for your all the time,
Because I'll see you never,
Until my last rhyme,
When I meet you,
Far up in the sky,
I'll see you soon,
Because one day I to will die,
And then I can see you one more time,
Happy, in that garden in the sky,
Because I love you,
Not just for family,
You were an inspiration,
You understood too,
You saved my sanity,
Every time I saw you,
But now your gone,
Gone forever
And I just dont know what to do...
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-01-12 11:47:26]
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Re: Goodbye
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by mercedes on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:02:36 PM AEST
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| Its always hard to face something like this. Your pain and loss shows thru your writing. I hope you are alright. It might help if you can find someone else to talk to that also understands. Keep writing |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:14:49 PM AEST
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Very emotional! It's very very sad, I'm really sorry for you. Try to continue living, don't fall into depression!! Very touching!
Anne |
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Re: Goodbye
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:48:20 PM AEST
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this was very sad...theres alot of emotion,but stay strong...and its a very good write^_-
luv always |
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Re: Goodbye
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by carebear on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:48:30 PM AEST
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Hey!
I know how u feel bout this it sorta of reminds me of the friend I lost from suicide he was only 15 this made me think of him however I think of him alot...I know lyfe isn't always easy but we have to keep our heads up high n not show the rest of the world we're dieing inside wanting to let go but knowing it will get better soon -huggles- a very good writer Im gald u got this all out.We're talkin right now on Y'Messanger:):) keep writen it wasn't a bad poem at all it was very deep:)
Much Luv N' Poet Respect
Love Much
CareBear |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 11:32:47 AM AEST
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| This reminds me of the very idea of my aunt. It was a good write man. Anyone who has had someone like that in their life would have felt it... Though the loss is sometimes more to bare than what they gave because there is no more they can give or help with. It was a good write Alec. |
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