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Your Window of Tears
Contributed by
phildel
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Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 08:30:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sullied are the hands that held you
Forgotten are words you once stole
From the lips of passers by who
Would gladly envelope you whole.
Roses are for graves now although
Your heaving heart beats on
Loves so much more than a stone throw
Away, for they’ve all gone.
I watch the daylight fade fast
Through reflections, full of tears
And as I turn and face you I
Realise you’ve been gone for years.
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phildel
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2002-09-01 08:30:26]
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Re: Your Window of Tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 08:35:17 AM AEST
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| So sad....nicely written tho.. |
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Re: Your Window of Tears
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by Lia on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 08:35:52 AM AEST
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| This is so sad...my heart goes out to you... |
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Re: Your Window of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 03:05:09 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem. I like the last two lines. |
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Re: Your Window of Tears
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by Phildel on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 11:58:57 PM AEST
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, much appreciated,
Phildel xx |
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