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Still addicted
Contributed by
Necromant
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Still infected with your sweet poison,
I linger on the shore watching the horizon,
With the ghost of your memory in my head,
I can’t conceive the idea that you are now dead
You came in my life with all your confidence,
And kissed away my dull emptiness,
You’ve breached the walls of my defences,
And took possession on all of my senses
For you I lowered my guard,
And lead you straight to my heart,
For your intoxicating love I became addicted,
How was I to know that our time would be so restricted?
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-01-12 09:15:02]
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Re: Still addicted
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 09:17:42 AM AEST
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Oh Anne..this is so beautifully touching....
Hugs
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Re: Still addicted
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by mercedes on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:05:46 AM AEST
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| Beautifully touching. Goes to show you we got to live for the time we have. |
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Re: Still addicted
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:51:06 AM AEST
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A good write and one I can relate to.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Still addicted
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:42:42 PM AEST
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wow, you must have alot of feelings for this person, congratulations on such a wonderful write
Alec Fernandez
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Re: Still addicted
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by Manicmuze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:23:57 PM AEST
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We have to take those chances of letting our guard down in order to really experience the joys that life has to offer i think.
I found this very sad, real and full of emotion. A strong write, I enjoyed this, nicely done.
~ Wendy
Thanks for the warm welcome :) |
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Re: Still addicted
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by mystERA on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:03:08 PM AEST
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vera nice!!
i imagine this poem being a song.....a sad, slow song. With weeping violins in the background :)
what d'you think?
ellie
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Re: Still addicted
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:25:06 PM AEST
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yeah, sad and touching really deep inside....I'm sorry for your sorrow
jeanie |
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Re: Still addicted
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by kori31 on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:36:03 PM AEST
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| awesome....hit me right in the heart reminding me of an ex who passed away... |
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Re: Still addicted
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:40:24 AM AEST
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Awsome!!!!! Heart shattering! Oh my this is so close home! Very well written. Blessed be
Claire |
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Re: Still addicted
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:20:13 PM AEST
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| mmm this poem hits home hard... beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Still addicted
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:12:39 PM AEST
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written with lots of emotion an enjoyable read.
wildej. |
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