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i don't know
Contributed by
stitches
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:24:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the scars on my wirst
bleed poison
memories that choke me
yet comfort, somehow
knowing
almost welcoming
the past
coming full circle
due to try again
comfortable
in a sanity
that shattered
the pieces
powdered to nothing
tears for what??!
the taste of salt
i can't even remember why...
when vulnerable
i see nothing
but stupidity
is the happiness
that's being swallowed
by reality
of disassociation
my life is a ***** metaphor!
why can't this computer crash
and end it all
tears fall
like moonlight
shadowed in the dragon'e eyes
burning with desire
that "tomorrow" is trying
so hard extinguish
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stitches
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2004-01-12 08:24:43]
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Re: i don't know
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:42:40 AM AEST
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Oh nice style! The words show your frastration, really amazing and I loved the ending!!!
tears fall
like moonlight
shadowed in the dragon'e eyes
burning with desire
that "tomorrow" is trying
so hard extinguish
Niceee !!!
Keep on writing!!
Anne ;) |
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Re: i don't know
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 03:23:53 PM AEST
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ahhhh... i enjoyed just breathing this in..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: i don't know
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:23:17 AM AEST
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| I liked this one. It was very interesting. Granted it wasn't quite as dark as some of your other writes it was still good. |
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Re: i don't know
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:37:52 PM AEST
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this was f*cking beautiful I loved it. Especially the first two lines. I hope to see more from u soon.
Bobo (Joel) |
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