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Completely
Contributed by
alphaz
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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On the edge, all alone
right next to
the emergency phone
His 4 door sedan
was a few yards away
parking lights flashing
thoughts in disarray
And in just an instant
he leapt toward the sea
then hit the water
to such a degree
they never found him
completely
Copyright ©
alphaz
... [
2004-01-12 02:08:54]
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Re: Completely
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:23:07 AM AEST
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haunting write well done Ill watch for more
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Re: Completely
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by sapphire2589 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:03:02 AM AEST
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| well written but sad |
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