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Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest

Contributed by spiffyphil on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:03:36 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



If she didn't make it - they would never know,
Never to be known - her stream would never flow,
No legacy left behind - cause she didn't grow,
An early death - All forgotten and nothing to show.
Shes here - Shes now - Shes all go.

Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.

Never could take it - but could take the pill,
She struggles to make it - but shes had her fill,
Her parents wont believe -they dont think its real,
Keeping pain silent - she thinks she wont feel,
She'll swallow. She'll slice. She'll suffice.

Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.

All alone - she thinks noone sees,
How much it hurts - neglected mental fees,
The universe so large - how pointless she seems,
she'll slit her wrists - forcing her own peace,
Shes there. Shes scared. Shes beyond repair.

Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
She made the wrong decision.

She can't do it - Cause she does beleive,
She wont do it - when she finds relief,
She hasn't done it - cause she can achieve,
Her sanity totters - Murmured heart on a sleave,
She can't. She wont'. She hasn't.

Suicide, for attention - for nothing.
Shes making the RIGHT decision.




Copyright © spiffyphil ... [ 2004-01-12 01:03:36]
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Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by spiffyphil on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:42:08 AM AEST
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I wrote this poem with the intention of turning it into a song. It was a peice of therapy for a girl who constantly contemplated suicide. It is sad to say that I had found out she commited suicide just recently. I never met her.


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 07:26:14 AM AEST
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It is beautiful.....Im proud of you.I also want to say there wasnt anything you could had said or done for her.she had already made up here mind.you were a good friend to be there to talk with her.take care.sandy


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:01:37 PM AEST
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This is so damn beautiful.. im so sorry about the girl.. at least she's at peace now..
x_x_x


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:56:01 AM AEST
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its good


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:12:48 AM AEST
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Very rarely do i read a poem that seriously touches me to the point of causing tears. I am like that girl, and have met a poet on here that watches over me. Without him, i think i would of attempted suicide a second time already. Im sure she appreciated your support but sometimes its not always enough.


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by imlostbutloved69 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:23:08 PM AEST
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I'm the girl you wrote this poem to, seriously! I AM HERE! I AM ALIVE! It's been nearly 4 months since I've looked at this poem and I found it today and I cried. I'm sorry I made you think I was dead, but here I am, I'm alive and real. And you still have a chance to meet me, I'm not giving up! I intend on living this hell to the fullest. My friends have picked me up, turned my face toward the sky and dragged from darkness into light!


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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depending on the person's situation, sometimes death can be make a person happier than living can....

good job. keep writin.

~Sara


Re: Behold and Behave III: Slit Wrist Popularity Contest (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:54:51 PM AEST
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This is a truely amazing piece. I can totally relate. Thank you for telling me to check it out. I agree with Sara, depending on the situation. I wonder what death brings? Is it better than what a twisted life has to offer? I'm very sorry to hear that the girl actually did end up killing herself. Best of luck.
Katie




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