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Night Encloses
Contributed by
phildel
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Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 08:21:40 AM in AEST
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oops
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Night encloses, darkness,
Licks it's tongue into the corners
Of the town,
A burnt out cigar,
In the mouth of a frown,
Sits still.
Deep purple/black skies,
Strangle the light out of my eyes,
As the sky bleeds,
After melting,
All over the sea.
And still I know darkness,
Will never truly,
Touch me.
I watch the night fold,
Around this town of old,
And wonder what morning may bring,
A reversal of colours,
A package of dollars,
Promise, of a new song
to sing.
Copyright ©
phildel
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2002-09-01 08:21:40]
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Re: Night Encloses
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 08:24:24 AM AEST
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Nice write... I love to sit at night and wait for the new day to unfold....tho I don't get to do it often anymore.....
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Re: Night Encloses
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 03:33:08 PM AEST
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awesome write....it conjured up so many images in my mind....
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Re: Night Encloses
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by Phildel on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 12:01:04 AM AEST
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Great! I'm so glad you think that, I feel so satisfied my poem has done for you what I intended it to do, which was primarily to paint that picture in the readers mind...
Thanks!
Phildel xx |
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