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Tear-Washed Floor
Contributed by
eyesrustedshut
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:15:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tear drops lead from your darkened room
The setting of our afternoon
On the bed you sit with a smile
As you think back a while
Maybe more like a lifetime ago
These days have flown by so
Then liquid diamonds stream down your face
And you can't pinpoint when you fell from grace
But you think of all the times I held you up
And still it'll never be enough
I tell you "don't worry you can't force yourself to love
The trick is you must stay steadfast
If it's meant to be it will last"
Every word I say cuts me that much more
As I walked from your room my tears pounded the floor
Now I'm waiting and I'm sure you know
I'm waiting but you've let me go
So partly dying I write you this
And in waiting, I'll not forget your kiss
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eyesrustedshut
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2004-01-11 21:15:08]
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Re: Tear-Washed Floor
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:56:32 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written yet so very sad. |
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Re: Tear-Washed Floor
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 11:19:47 PM AEST
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very sad write but very well expressed.. I really liked that last line "I'll not forget your kiss" sometimes love hurts and isn't returned.. which is sad I really liked this one
Peace
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Re: Tear-Washed Floor
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by Cancer on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:14:26 AM AEST
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that was beautiful. i'm not sure that there are words to describe how much i loved this. this gets a "skittles".
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Re: Tear-Washed Floor
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by Manicmuze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:39:07 PM AEST
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This is sadly beautiful... sometimes we have to let people go in order to get them back. Unrequitted love sucks.
Well done, I enjoyed this,
~ Wendy |
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