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The fight
Contributed by
Lessa
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:36:48 PM in AEST
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To get the last word sometimes means lossing your respect
i think i lost that tonight, as we fought, as we danced the dance of the wicked, of the crul, of the mean,
back and forth our bantter continued
we tossed the ball of anger back and forth to one another
u called me names, i called u worse, we punch each other with words and it only got harsher
u told me i used u and never loved u, ill let u belive that since i want u to, it will hurt u more if u do
i told you u were sweet and said kind things to you,
i knew that would make u shiver and cry,
i knew everything to say to make u hurt worse, i knew how to cut u as deep as i could,
i got the last word and i knew i had won
untill tonight when u said i was heartless
i thought i was numb, like i knew it was comeing, but who can brace themselves from the knife of words
this fight is over, i really am numb now
i give up the last word to u
cause now i am down
will u kick me? i would
this fight is over, im bloody and bruised,
let it be known that u finally won
Copyright ©
Lessa
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2004-01-11 20:36:48]
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Re: The fight
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by monkey on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:08:19 PM AEST
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Wow. I got the chills reading this. Reminds of a fight I had. Sounds like this really happened to you too. Am I wrong? Its really good. I like it. Nice job.
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Re: The fight
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:27:17 PM AEST
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| Good write... Yes, I understand this very well... I have found silence is also a good final word ecspecially when they are looking for you to say something. This was very strong. |
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