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Double Pace Race
Contributed by
shadowmaster_045
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Feeling That You Get Whenever You See Her Face. It's Like Another Race And You Cannot Take The Pressure. You Can't See Through Your Own Imagination, Your Clouded Thoughts And Dreams Make It Hard For You To Be Yourself. You Keep Away From Others Don't Even Talk To Your Own Mother, Father, Or Brother. Your Barrier Is Too Strong For Me To Brake. I've Lost You Now And I Can't Take The Information You're Giving To Me. I'm Slipping Away Can't You See? I Know How You're Gonna React To The Fact That You Can't Pass Back To The Past To Get Through The Fact That The Race Is Over. But You Realize Your Not In A Race You Runnin' From Your Fears. Yet No Matter How Hard You Try You Know You've Lost Pace With Your Mind And Your Running Out Of Tyme.
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Re: Double Pace Race
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by shelby on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:26:49 PM AEST
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Wow!! this is intense from start to finish very deep!
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Re: Double Pace Race
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by shadowmaster_045 on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:22:51 PM AEST
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Thanks Michelle I appriciate your comment It's nice to here some feedback from your work. So thank you so very Much :o)!!
Zac--shadowmaster_04@yahoo.com or shadowmaster3231@hotmail.com |
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