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I Wonder
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:00:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wonder when I see,
Children playing;
Happy Families
I wonder what it would be like,
For once not to dislike,
Any form of unity
I wonder when I see,
Birds up in a tree;
Unaware of anything,
Happy just to sing,
Happy just to be
I wonder when I cry,
What it would be like to die;
Somewhere nice and cold,
Somewhere I wont be told,
But I cant say goodbye
I wonder when I bleed,
What is my perfect creed;
Is it other than a knife,
Is it the comfort of the night,
Or is it his words I heed
I wonder when I think,
Whats the missing link;
Is it something deep inside,
Is it something I cant hide,
I cant decide, so I drink
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alecfernadez
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2004-01-11 12:00:54]
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Re: I Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:28:29 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. i loved it. |
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Re: I Wonder
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:49:06 PM AEST
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Wow! This is one of your greatest poems! Very deep, emotional and touching!! Beautiful, amazing!!!!
Anne |
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Re: I Wonder
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by CountryGirl on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:12:27 PM AEST
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| I haven't read poetry like this in awhile. It has very deep emotion. |
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Re: I Wonder
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:07:20 PM AEST
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| I also have a poem titled "I wonder" but it is about starving children and terrorism..and me sitting on my fat derrier drinking diet cola worrying about my weight. and I wonder if these homeless children will ever heal and if my apathy will ever heal so that I can awaken to the condition of the outside world and stop focusing on self...maybe I'll post it someday. cheers! |
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Re: I Wonder
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by MissTea on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:25:10 AM AEST
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lots of questions, that only one day can be answered! another awesome poem alex. you always seem to provide, only because you speak whats inside!!
MissTea |
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