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Love me Death!
Contributed by
venkat
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:07:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Oh, Death! My love! Rise up at once
Just like a harlot Empress in a bouge
Nude, unashamed, exulting with pride
Upraise your dark beautiful evil face
And panic me with a shuddering kiss,
Then crush me twixt the magnificence
Of your fatal breasts and squeeze my
Blood spattering spirit into thy abyss
As my soul merges into thy final bliss!
11-1-2004
Copyright ©
venkat
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2004-01-11 09:07:32]
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Re: Love me Death!
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:08:06 AM AEST
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WOW!!!!!!!! WOWOWOW!!! AMAZING!! Stunning imagery! I love this one!! Yepp!! Defintely! WoW!! In thrilled. The personification is terrific! Absolutely beautiful!
Anne |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:26:21 AM AEST
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Great imagery.... amazing!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:32:24 AM AEST
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Oh death where is thy sting.
Good work!
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:55:12 AM AEST
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| Wow!!.. but it can't claim you sir.. |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:24:34 AM AEST
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I have no words, i'll just stand quietly in awe...
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 07:21:08 AM AEST
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| WOW..WOW..WOW..but you know I hate the very idea...sorry.. K |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:09:33 AM AEST
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| An extraordinary piece of art..very powerful and super stunning write..bravo venkat.. |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:28:24 AM AEST
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| I have also imagined death as my lover ... a cry from your heart venkat ... awesome write ... Jan |
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Re: Love me Death!
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 09:51:12 PM AEST
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| great piece. truely wonderful in all aspects. |
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