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Only Just a Game
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:59:24 AM in AEST
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Only Just a Game
I met you on the Internet
you told me your real name,
never did you realise
I was playing just a game.
You told me all your secrets
your deep desires too,
you told me that you loved me
though I had just met you.
Pictures which you sent me
I placed them in a file,
some where you were wearing
nothing but a smile.
Fingers on a keyboard
words upon a screen,
you said you felt you knew me
forever so it seemed.
We typed and typed
through out the night
until the break of day
and never did you realise
it was just a game I play.
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eternal_sorrows
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2004-01-11 08:59:24]
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Re: Only Just a Game
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:15:32 PM AEST
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mixed messages on that one... That poem, even though maybe not serious, I relate to, in that... Read Showroom...
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Re: Only Just a Game
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:18:03 AM AEST
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I like the subject,
the poem is cruel and cold like techknowolgy with a cheeky edge, the rhythm and rhyme of this one work well, it made me laugh. |
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