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fantasy
Contributed by
Muziqal
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:04:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wished I lived in a Fantasy
but unfortunatly
I live in reality
and sometimes it hurts me
because thats all I see
As I pass by a kid in my chevy
I see him begging for money
so he doesnt go hungry
and i remember how that could have been me
then suddenly im thankful for my family
and i realize im living his fantasy
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Muziqal
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2004-01-11 03:04:44]
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Re: fantasy
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by dudleysgirl on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:12:02 AM AEST
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| Reality certainly can be a rude awakening, that's for sure. It's sad that the fantasy you describe here is a reality as well. Nicely done. |
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Re: fantasy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:07:15 AM AEST
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So very true...good write.
Jenni |
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