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Tonight
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:11:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’ve never felt as lonely as I’ve felt tonight
Knowing in my heart all the things that aren’t right
I’ve never felt as bad as how I feel right now
Cutting in silence I take my vow
I’ve never felt as hurt with tears streaming down my cheek
I never thought in this lifetime death would be something I’d seek
Tonight I hold these doubts, not knowing what I want
I never thought that for eternity my past would continue to haunt
I’ve never felt so rejected, so alone, so un-pure
And now I know for certain that nothing’s ever sure
I’ve never felt so angry, so hateful, so sad
The only wish I want is to erase the past I had
I’ve never felt so wrong, so weak, so confused
And now I wonder if darkness will be something I get through
I’ve never wanted something as much as I want your love
But even through my darkest times love has never been enough
I’ve never felt so dirty, so wasted, so wrong
And now I wonder if I this world is where I truly belong
I’ve never been so ashamed, so disappointed in myself
This is all becoming too much, memories falling off the shelf
I’ve never felt these emotions all at one time
And now I crawl further into the darkness of my mind
I’ve never felt so out of place, so invisible, so dead
And now I reminisce and question the life I have lead
I’ve never wanted to end it all as much as I do tonight
‘Til now I have never wanted to give up on this fight.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-01-11 01:11:38]
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Re: Tonight
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:19:04 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT! All those feelings damn I know what you mean. Truly sad this write cause I can relate so much, many people will be able to relate to at least half of what you are saying. I hope that you will be able to get through tonight or that night, if it's gone or if it's to come. Give me hope that I can get through it too. Excellent write. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Tonight
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by Solmyr1404 on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:27:51 AM AEST
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| i know how you feel, but please tell me you're not really considering this. Death is not the answer to your problems. It's an answer to other peoples' problem of lack of compassion and care. |
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Re: Tonight
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:48:05 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you feel because I felt the same way and due to dumb luck I'm still here. I realised that giving up is not the right thing after coming at an inch of death. Be strong and have faith in your self.
The poem is really great very vivid description and very well chosen words. Good writing skill!
Anne ;) |
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Re: Tonight
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:03:29 PM AEST
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| This was a very good poem. I hope the pain fades soon for you. I love your work and would hate for you to go in any way shape or form. |
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