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Behold and Behave I: Introduction
Contributed by
spiffyphil
on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:33:51 AM in AEST
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Behold and Behave the story begins,
The story of my life and it's events,
Feeling you, feeling me, describing my sins,
Each chapter unique - torn from battered skins,
I've lowered my gaurd and opened the fence.
Each word must be squeezed for all its sincerity,
This language can't fathom all that must be said,
Each peice given all of a delcaration's clarity,
One's thoughts, all of one's heart, I bargain for charity,
This is a new trend, inside taking the lead.
My heart wants to speak louder than my mind,
Blessed with what I am and nothing more,
Demanding this therapy, for situations one must grind,
Making it, confused in the dreary of every day's kind,
This man refuses to be societys' whore.
So welcome all to the series of emotions,
darkness, lightness, in all of the monochromatic scale,
As simple as it is not to navigate life's oceans,
I will speak my spirit and describe every motion,
To the wonderless days, of eternal pale.
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spiffyphil
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Re: Behold and Behave I: Introduction
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:07:03 AM AEST
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I love your writing texture ! It's different and very well written !!I especially liked "Each word must be squeezed for all its sincerity,
This language can't fathom all that must be said,
Each peice given all of a delcaration's clarity,
One's thoughts, all of one's heart, I bargain for charity,
This is a new trend, inside taking the lead."But then again I pretty much loved it all !Nice job,well done !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PumpkinPie
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Re: Behold and Behave I: Introduction
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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Geez You've put a lot of emotion in this one. Very descriptive and very good wording! I like it!!
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