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natures music
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:33:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you ever listen to water running down a hill,
the way it move is baffling still.
the noise it makes as it burst through the ground,
the wind it create is a shivering sound.
the earth shake as it move down,
finely reaching out with a crushing sound.
as it settles into a resting place, it begain to
bobble at an amazing pace and with out a sound it just settles
into a place we call a river.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2002-09-01 07:33:36]
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Re: natures music
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by Lia on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:40:14 AM AEST
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| This poem paints a beautiful picture...I really like it. But I have to ask..did you purposely leave out all the needed S's?? |
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Re: natures music
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by Mystery_Girl on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 09:42:37 AM AEST
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| Yeah this is nice and how beautiful our world really is in some places....:-) |
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