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Fist of Therapy

Contributed by spiffyphil on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:57:27 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I never get to enjoy the daze in the morning;
His selfish stubborness carries to every day;
Feeling like the somone to make him realize;
Staring at him to make him see.

shrugged shoulders and lowered brows;
Hat casting shadows over glazed eyes;
Intense breathes come in full as each fuels rage;
Staring at him to make him see.

None would even dare say wrongful words to me;
Alone and invincible keeping my flame in control;
Mentaly having killed a man - feeling facless;
Staring at him to make him see.

Rising from his cowering stuppor - he evacuates himself;
All of his doubts having come shining into a reality;
For all of his selfishness - a very simple declarative;
Staring at him, unconcious, to make him see.

Silence and social depravation from humiliation;
He becomes a better man - more aware of himself;
In proper time his contacts are of clear honesty and respect;
Staring at him having made him see, I shake his hand.

Copyright © spiffyphil ... [ 2004-01-10 23:57:27]
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Re: Fist of Therapy (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:12:13 AM AEST
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Very vivid description! This poem emanates emotion! very well written!!

Anne

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