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WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:55:36 PM in AEST
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My eyes are opening in my soul.
Learning more as I go.
Now maybe,
You don't like things I've done,
learning lessons is never fun.
Passing thru my minds eye,
forgive me if I made you cry.
Before you know it someday,
a stranger may need to pay.
No matter what
it'll get thru>>'cause look at you.
Forgive me for sitting in God's seat.
We're all unique.
Keep trying,
we've all got to learn,
pay the wrongs we've done.
There's hope for me and you
'cause we're jus passing thru!
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emystar
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:20:04 AM AEST
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Yes..we are all just passing thru....and always learning...
Hugs
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:43:42 AM AEST
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| I agree on that one! This was a great write I enjoyed this! Christina |
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by venkat on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:49:45 AM AEST
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Agreed we're all just passing thru..a wonderful poem..peace luv and joy..
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:10:08 AM AEST
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Very true!! Great writing!!
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by eternal_sorrows on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:51:26 AM AEST
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Great thought here, yes, we're just passing through. Good meter, rhyme and deep thought!
ES |
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 04:40:17 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom my friend,
Well done
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:17:18 AM AEST
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So true are your words, this poem certainly wakes the mind and heart. Well written
Cheers
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Re: WE'RE JUS PASSING THRU
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by Jazz on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:50:14 PM AEST
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This world is not my home, I'm just passing through... I bet the man upstairs is smiling...
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