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Partying around
Contributed by
Necromant
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Now that the week is done,
Its time to have some fun!
C’mon get up and move,
Let your body sway in the groove,
Drink some wine, vodka and beer,
Get drunk its time to cheer!
Can you feel the rising heat?
C’mon move with the beat!
Shake, jump and shout,
Its time to let your frustrations out,
Loose your mind in the rhythm of the night,
And cling to this moment with all your might
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-01-10 19:19:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:31:44 PM AEST (User
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i like happy poems :)
keep it up!
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkYYBLu on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:36:08 PM AEST (User
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(lol) LOVED IT!! Very original. Don't see many of these but people should start writing more of them! Great write.
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Empty_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:37:25 PM AEST (User
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a happy poem, most uncharacteristic lol. good job though, could do with some happiness and friday nights down the pub for rock night is as good as it gets! hehe. keep up the good writes.
ES |
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:40:52 PM AEST (User
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nice job enjoy
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 08:36:07 PM AEST (User
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sounds like much fun here I come lol!! This is light hearted and a wonderful read
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:13:59 AM AEST (User
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Wow..it is a beautiful piece..very happy read. venkat |
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ramfire on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:34:23 AM AEST (User
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Yes, just unwind after a long hard week. We all need that. Nice couplets! |
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Re: Partying around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:26:25 AM AEST (User
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Cheers! Dunno how you are so I won't toast my normal toast with ya. I liked it for obvious reasons heh. Sorry took so bloody long to get to it. Only 9 days behind lol. |
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