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Nothing
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Thy false love shineth in dark places
Where all other love has been forsaken
Who now can gain say you?
Who now can stand against you?
In torment I endure this pain
Yet it is all in vain
Fore I will never breathe the air so pure
That I hath long forseen
In darkness I was wrought
In darkness I remain
Being stabbed in vain
By words that sting
And poison me to the core
My heart begins to sink within its blood
Forcing me to swallow my tears of acid
As they feed upon my soul
I disintigrate within
I am in constant reproach
Whither now shall I go?
Oppressed by thee I feel nothing
I cannot see what lies ahead
I cannot see what is to come
Oppressed by thee I feel nothing
Mist and shadow engulf me
I hath no where to turn
Save towards you, my love
I cannot see, for I am nothing
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SkYYBLu
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2004-01-10 19:11:00]
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Re: Nothing
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:30:18 PM AEST
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Such strong words!!!!!! The most painful and evil af all feelings is unreciprocated love. I know it from expierance! And I understand fully what you mean! Very vivid imagery! Great work! Keep Strong and write more :p
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Re: Nothing
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
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I feel your sadness well done
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Re: Nothing
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:00:35 PM AEST
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Great write..well done..... Can relate...best of luck!!
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Re: Nothing
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:24:32 AM AEST
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| After the comment I think I understand this pretty well. I know this feeling. I really liked this poem alot. Very good write. |
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Re: Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 03:11:26 PM AEST
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i can relate just fine though i wish i couldnt
hope you feel better now
Sincerly
Jaylormccaffrey |
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