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weird sphere
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:34:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i'm engulfed in emptiness
it can't stay this way and
i've got to crack it 'cause i can
feel it's only egg-shell thin since
transition is a compulsory part of
living
in this weird social sphere
where you blink and
your best friend is your worst enemy because
deep in change lies fear
of strange apsects of people
which they've never showed before
so you're scared and now you're running
desperately locking all the doors
all the windows, all the openings that let them inside your mind, and yes,
you're safe now, all alone and
sealed off from the outside, but you're back with your feeling of emptiness
egg-shell thin, though it may feel
your tears of pure frustration
won't help life be any less real
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-01-10 17:34:05]
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Re: weird sphere
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:22:14 PM AEST
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What a thoughtful poem! It is really true, wherever you go, you can't escape reality. Great work
Anne |
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Re: weird sphere
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:45:38 PM AEST
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| thank you anne. your feedback is much appreciated :) |
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