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Leaving
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I run this razor firmly across my wrists
It's all too much, this is it
I can't take it, it's time to go
Death is upon me lerking slow
And all I needed was to be free
And all I wanted was to be me
All I wanted was to be loved
To never feel like it wasn't enough
All I wanted was to be with my friends
To have the good times never end
With two slices the blood starts to seep
As I see the ones I care about start to weep
My blood runs freely and hits the floor
On this earth I'll be no more
Remember who I was and not what I've done
Remember all the nights we had fun
I'm sorry you're hurting but you must move on
As everything now is gone.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
... [
2004-01-10 17:31:42]
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Re: Leaving
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:11:52 AM AEST
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This write was so sad to me. But I loved every line. I feel like this too...doing this...awesome write. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: Leaving
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 11:16:05 AM AEST
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| That was really really good. I loved it. Very talented and it was so wonderfuly dark. |
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Re: Leaving
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:38:06 PM AEST
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| *sighes*...... so so sad.... I am speachless............. |
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