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Rànë

Contributed by fionndruinne on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 03:15:41 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry




Loneliness like a sea
Surrounds my soul
When the light fades
My way wanes
Darkness drifts
Like a cloud coming
Across the ocean
When I walk alone
My heart cries
In sad silence
Footsteps fall
As I wander wide
My heart longs
For light lifting
Warmth kindling
Joy brightening
In the distance
Stars shine
But thrice-distant
How can I reach them?




Copyright © fionndruinne ... [ 2004-01-10 15:15:41]
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Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:26:58 AM AEST
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I sure feel it. Good write.

Emma.


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:00:53 PM AEST
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Ah.. pure alliteration... impressive.
See you in about an hour.
David


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:26:45 PM AEST
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This poem speaks to my heart. I can empathize with that sentiment. Since dad's death, I have been very lonely and can feel so desolate- but the Lord is my Comforter. Beautifully written, as always. The Lord has given you a wonderful gift as a wordsmith.


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:03:20 PM AEST
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Their is a contentment in the loneliness expressed here. I once wrote something about there being a comfort in a loneliness that has become a friend. I like this. So different from your other writes. I like the honesty of it.
Stitch


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:40:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful and longing for what is just out of reach...
Greetz,
Hur


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:30:35 AM AEST
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In the distance
Stars shine
But thrice-distant
How can I reach them?

i loved this! especially this ending excellent work.

wildejohnny.


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:39:43 PM AEST
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Oh, I've so been there. Hope you're not lonely too often. But the poem is terrific.
Love,
Chelsea


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by frejya on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:24:25 AM AEST
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i can relate 2 this one
nice work
me


Re: Rànë (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:37:38 PM AEST
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Andrew; this was such a well thought out poem. As a reader, your emotions really jumped out at me. I really enjoyed this! You have a way with words that's almost enchanting.... Scorp.




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