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wait until another day for rainbows
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:00:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i would have given you all of my heart
but you don't want to shake your world apart
where everything is as it should be
with you neatly living there and here, me
all you would have had to do is ask
in your love i would have forever basked
here you are right next to me and i feel a distance
i feel you are looking at us all askance
i still want you by my side
yet go on; from feelings hide
something else more important than me
someday this truth, i hope you see;
that love is given freely and finds a way
and does not wait for perfection
i feel as if i'm held at arms length
where dear, is all of our strength?
true words you spoke, of what now are you afraid?
as if not ere' uttered, now a barricade
look back upon this day and say,
"we were together not so long ago"
wait until another day for rainbows
unasked questions you may never know
over this wall; soon back to living day by day
hoping madly sweet love will find a way
singing sweet praises of one another
longing, each one, without the other
i would have given you all of my heart
but you don't want to shake your world apart
*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by Merry on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:48:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful words Nessa - making me feel all teary eyed. Why is love so complicated? Sometimes it seems as if fate likes to toy with our hearts just for the heck of it. Hope springs eternal that true love will prevail
think positively
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:50:03 PM AEST
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I feel your pain in each word Nessa. Glad to see you writing again even if it is a sad one.
Roses for your hurt,
Larry |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:17:14 PM AEST
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Nessa this is sweetly sad if that is possible. Email me soon ok?Hugs and much love to you!
Michelle |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:23:53 PM AEST
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| So bittersweet, a beautiful write straight from the heart .. all my hopes are with you ... Jan |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:39:42 PM AEST
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Awwww Ness.....painful to read...but well done.... Hope to see you soon...
Luv and Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:34:37 AM AEST
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| AAWW This was a touching read! Hope all is well with you HUGS!!!!!! Glad your writing again! Christina |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:43:15 AM AEST
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Aww, Nessa... that's so sad. Brings to mind an old relationship of mine... I just hope this turns out better than mine did! I really do hope everything turns out okay. Lotsa love,
~ Dee |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 09:41:22 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I had a love like this. He is not in my life now, but will always be in my heart. Love should always come with a rainbow, I think. Rita |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by colinb on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 01:19:43 AM AEST
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| the emotions seeps out of the words Nessa |
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Re: wait until another day for rainbows
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 01:14:17 AM AEST
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Wise words of wisdom...
Beautiful... |
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