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The vampire's cry
Contributed by
Necromant
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:01:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Resurrecting from the grave every night, was once my greatest delight,
Now after centuries of endless life, for my destruction I strive,
Eating,
Feeling,
Breathing,
Things that you do, that make me envious for you
The hunger for your blood is my only source of desire,
And trough your throat it pours in form of liquid fire,
I give you a gentle caress and, as I drink your life I possess,
And when in my arms you die, everyone will hear my cry
Help me I’m begging on my knees, give my soul some release,
For I can’t continue hating, for you I’ll be waiting,
To bring an end to my eternal existence, I will not oppose any resistance
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-01-10 11:01:51]
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:43:17 AM AEST
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showed the agony of the existance well written
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:43:43 PM AEST
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| wow, its like you can get inside the head and mindstate of any character, and then write as if it is you that is a vampire. Thats an excellent skill, keep up the great work |
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:52:02 PM AEST
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| well done, love it, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by Empty_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:15:09 PM AEST
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AMAZING! really great write once again, loving this poem sooo much, it ties in with mine really well to! think i'll check out your werewolf on next! well done once again.
ES |
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:56:23 AM AEST
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Hmmm...I love vampires...I love well written dark poetry...I love vivid imagery...So, I love this!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST
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Pretty good again! :D I like all this vamp and werewolf stuff and you put it in way that fits, just go on, I can't wait for another one :D:D
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:11:44 PM AEST
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wow.. what a powerful image you have displayed..
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by Avis_Nigra on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:22:50 AM AEST
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| *bows in respect and flashes his fangs in a smile* |
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:47:28 PM AEST
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O, wonderful. I love vampires!
Keep it going on!
*sighs*
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by arden on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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WOW i love vampires and this was just awesome! im speechless. just so well written and great. i love this. keep it up.
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Re: The vampire's cry
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:19:45 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful =)
Very powerful and emotive, much like the works of Anne Rice.
Thanks for sharing.
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