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Trust
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:20:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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So many things, all in a child's eye,
searching above to the sky,
So many things hurt,
So many things have been learnt,
But one thing I cant ever do
Is trust anyone, not even you
Everytime I trusted someone,
they betrayed me,
and always made fun,
They couldnt see,
that a little honesty,
could go such a long way
I tried, I put trust in to many people
I thought they needed me,
Even trusted god and his steeple,
But why couldnt I see,
They didnt want me, just my body
It should have been so simple
Now I walk, alone and betrayed
To the edge of my life,
Still used, dead and unsaved,
Trusting only the night,
Avoiding the inevitble fight,
With myself
But then you came along,
I didnt trust you at first,
Wanting to know what was wrong,
Wondering why I hurt,
And from all the lessons I learnt,
I couldnt trust in you
But you kept on, you persisted,
Driving me mad; Dont know what to do,
Kept asking, always insisted,
caring about me, helping me through,
Asking why, when where and who,
And your compassion has made me trust again
I now trust you, you help me though pain
And someday, I might even tell you
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-01-10 10:20:50]
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Re: Trust
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:46:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!!!!!! VERY BEAUTIFUL and nice! At first very bitter but ended on a very positive tone! Hope you find someone to trust and be loyal! Wonderful flow, and wording! I really liked it!
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Re: Trust
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by MissTea on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:49:34 PM AEST
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you kept me hooked into and out of every stanza!!
amazing, hurtful, ouch, i'm sorry!
Well done again alex!!! very well done
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Re: Trust
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 03:50:12 PM AEST
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Beautifully done....positive attitude..
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Re: Trust
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:03:53 AM AEST
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Absolutely stunning write. I still trust blindly although every time I have been betrayed. Glad that you have found that one to trust to make you trust again...still doesn't mean you can't be cautious. And do tell them won't you. Thanks for sharing.
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