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Soldier Voják
Contributed by
Aika
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:10:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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SOLDIER
I was a soldier in a foreign country
I came to fight with enemies
I have never been scared
I had not known what was death
Right second day
We were passing the capital
Me and five other men
In our military vehicle
There were not many people in the streets
Scared they were hidden
The capital still was beautiful
Not yet by war destroyed
When suddenly above me
A weird sound I could hear
Then terrible blast
I covered my head with hands and dark
I do not know how long it took
I do not know, what occured
When I opened my eyes
In the dust swirling
My life has changed
Ruins, pieces of bodies
My friend saved me
His body covering me
The only I see, are angels
To heaven carrying dead souls
NO,I did not want this
So many dead ones I had never seen!!
I hear crying, running so fast
Someone survived, I am not only one alive
And I see – man with child
So many sores, so much blood
Does not matter he was enemy
Does not matter I was solder
I am human, I won´t let them die
I soothe the child, I mop his blood
How innocent, how small!
Why??? Why am I here so??
War is the punishment, for all of us
War does not solve,settlement is in us!
I lift them both up – father and child
Taking them away, where ruins aren´t around
My heart beating loud, teared off with sorrow
No, I am not soldier, it is not I
This was my first war
And also the last
That time we walked to seclusion
Today I live in „enemy“ area
Today all are my friends
I do not believe in segregace
Where people want to live, there is place
And nothing else matters
VOJÁK
Byl jsem vojákem v cizí zemi
Přišel jsem bojovat s nepřáteli
Nikdy jsem se nebál,
Co je smrt – tenkrát jsem neznal
Hned druhý den
Projížděli jsme městem
Já a vojáků pět ještě
Ve vojenském autě
Nebylo tu moc lidí v ulicích
Ze strachu zůstali schovaní
To město doposud bylo krásné
Krásné, válkou nedotčené
Když v ten moment nad hlavou
Divný zvuk jsem uslyšel
Pak strašný výbuch, zář
Rukama jsem si zakryl hlavu a tma
Nevím,jak dlouho to trvalo,
Nevím, co se celou dobu dělo
Když jsem otevřel oči,
V prachu vířícím,
můj život rázem se změnil
trosky, kusy lidských těl,
mě zachránil můj přítel
jeho tělo leželo na mým
podivné ticho, rozlézá se strach
je tu někdo živý? Zblázním se snad
jediné, co vidím, jsou andělé
odnášejí duše zemřelé
Ne, tohle jsem já nechtěl!
Tolik mrtvých ještě jsem neviděl!
Slyším nářek, utíkám,
Někdo přežil, nejsem živý sám
A vidím, muže s dítětem
Jsou samá rána, krev
Kašlu na to, že byl nepřítel,
Kašlu na to, že jsem vojákem
Jsem člověk, nenechám je zemřít
Ukonejším dítě, z něj chci krev setřít
Jak nevinné, jak maličké!
Proč??? Proč já tu jsem?
Válka je trest, pro všechny z nás
Válka neřeší, smír je v nás
Zvedám je oba, otce i dítě
Odvádím je pryč, kde nejsou jen sutě
Srdce mi tepe, rve jej žal
Ne, nejsem voják, to nejsem já
Tohle byla moje první válka
Byla i poslední
Tehdá jsme se dostali do ústraní
Dnes žiju na “nepřátelském“ území
Dnes všichni okolo jsou mí přátelé
Nevěřím na rozdělení
Kde lidé chtějí žít, tam místo jest
Na ničem jiném nezáleží
Copyright ©
Aika
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Re: Soldier Voják
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:32:03 AM AEST
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The cruelty of war grrr. Very descriptive and sad. Great writing!
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Re: Soldier Voják
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by MissTea on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:34:56 AM AEST
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very well done! u captured the meaninless behind war, and how sometimes, if willed, that there can be a rainbow after the storm.
Good read!
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Re: Soldier Voják
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:04:41 AM AEST
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great vivid description of war, great write n keep up the good work!
Alec Fernandez
(p.s. sorry about before, I was in a depressive angry mood, and I didnt mean to be a dick head) |
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Re: Soldier Voják
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 02:42:19 PM AEST
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| ah, how true and moving, like most of yours I've read so far....brr, I could almost feel to be there.. you've good talent to make ppl feel pulled into your stories, pretty well done! :D |
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Re: Soldier Voják
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:17:28 PM AEST
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You have captured the futility of war so well here Aika.Maybe the world leaders need to read this and think about what you have written.Then maybe, just maybe, this pointless destruction could be averted.
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