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To A Heart Like Mine
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:20:18 AM in AEST
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You asked me what's wrong
And I said you knew
Because it's the very same thing
That is consuming you
Feeling condemned to a loveless existence
Every hour it tears away
An obsession to rob me of sleep
Passing my mind every turn of the day
To have a heart full of love
And not a soul to give it to
No shoulder to cry on
To bring you up when you're feeling blue
No one to cuddle up with
Or to so much as hold your hand
No one to share triumph and laughter
To know your thoughts and understand
No one to share desires and wishes
No passionate eyes to fall into
And you know this most of all
The need to hear and say 'I love you'
So we've both had and lost love
And have never recaptured it since
Please, somewhere, let there be a heart
A kingdom in need of a prince
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by forever_lonely on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:26:09 AM AEST
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Hey v.s
this i an awesome peom i really connected to it because i have a friend thats experiencing what you've written about at this very moment actually she joined up yesterday from some nagging by me because her poems are mind blowing sometimes have a look at them her name is Fallen_eyes hehe she would love some good comments at the mo
As for this poem you strike again and this time with avengence ... a beautiful beautiful write about such longings, you have such an indescribable talent v.s
All the best
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:31:47 AM AEST
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Oh hell, I've been commenting a lot and I'm feeling stupid for repeating the same words but this one is worth it so here it comes again....
The emotions underlying this poem are really clear and I can say that I felt most of them while reading it. I had to re read it twice because I didn't want to let somesmall thing slip since everything you wrote is so Damn true! The wording is impressive and the flow is easy going, understandable and nice. May that somebody find what his/her heart desires.......Very good one
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:11:35 AM AEST
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Dear VS.,
You should stray more often, VS, because this write is lovely....of course sad, but then after I read it several times, I thought, I know what would help you to be Glad!
I lost a great love one time, VS, and I knew that if I sat around and thought of all that I had lost.....that would never do!
I stopped concentrating on myself, and found others that needed my love, charities, and community centers etc. You'd be surprized what a help you could be. You could volunteer at the schools to help young ones reads etc. All kinds of different experiences to help you get through! The only way to hold love is to give it away VS! And Love will tap you on the shoulder when you least expect it too!
I feel your pain, and please don't think I'm not sympathetic to it....But I want to see you stop hurting....and I know my plan will do just that!
It's tried and proven....so don't forget....go love someone, anyone, and while you do....you will also be loving you!
lovingcritters
ConSue
This was a lovely poem
Thanking you for sharing
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by Kie on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:19:24 AM AEST
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When I got to the last line, tears filled my eyes. Every kingdom needs a prince. When you write like this in my opinion you are at your all time best. You have such a gift for making the reader laugh, cry or feel your words-it's something that is natural that flows from within you, you are blessed.
This is my all time favorite and it is a truly wonderful poem.
Kie
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:34:50 PM AEST
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| Wow, I can relate to this poem so much ... and I liked the way you used another person to tell your tale to ... well done, great write ... Jan |
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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| Wow, what a wonderful write. I can relate to it so much. Good job! |
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by venkat on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:09:11 AM AEST
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| Very touching..wonderful wrte..venkat |
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:23:37 AM AEST
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Wow excellent write. Nice of you to write this for somebody who is going through this, maybe just like you. I can definately grasp your words and relate. All the best for you and your friend.
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:21:48 AM AEST
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| I must have missed last time you wrote like this. I liked it quite a bit. It was different than the music type style from before. I do think this is one of the better ones of yours that I have seen. |
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Re: To A Heart Like Mine
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by starlight_dancer on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:29:44 AM AEST
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That's a gorgeous poem, and you know I can relate to it :)
Anyway it's beautiful. Keep on writing because you have a true talent there!
Love
Sarah |
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