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Alone
Contributed by
alphaz
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:11:51 AM in AEST
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There were no bright reds, dull green or brown,
No notion of up or down,
No lights shining from a distant path,
No birds chirping, throwing water from a bath,
No whistling wind from the cold, cruel sky,
Just me, myself, and I
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2004-01-10 04:11:51]
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Re: Alone
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by MissTea on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:32:29 AM AEST
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wow, i've been by myself a lot of times. but never so alone that even nature deserts you!
good write, short but captured the meaning.
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Re: Alone
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by Merry on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:58:56 PM AEST
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a very powerful poem. well done. it is funny i wrote a poem called alone also and posted it yesterday lol - how weird is that?
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Re: Alone
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:10:50 AM AEST
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Just having ourself in itself is alone. Good short write. Got every thing you needed in it. I liked it.
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