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!*~Hell~*!
Contributed by
monkey
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:47:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I walk
through
the burning hot tunnels
of Hell
wondering
what I did to end up here
a bead of sweat
forms on my forehead
and falls
I begin to cry
knowing I will
never again
see my family
my knees drop
to the dirt;
my tears fall
and sizzle
in the fires
of the dark, hot, evil place
I will now call,
"home"
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-01-10 00:47:20]
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Re: !*~Hell~*!
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:59:30 AM AEST
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Excellent flow! When i'll die meet ya there heehee (liked this one)
Anne |
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Re: !*~Hell~*!
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST
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| just take a step back, let out a deep breathe, have a look around and you will find, the things are not as bad as it seems..... smooth work by the way.^_^ |
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Re: !*~Hell~*!
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:10:35 PM AEST
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| just take a step back, let out a deep breathe, have a look around and you will find, the things are not as bad as it seems..... smooth work by the way.^_^ |
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