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Funeral
Contributed by
monkey
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:42:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I stand by your casket
as tears stream
down my face
I reach out my hand
and gently caress
you face
I stand with you
after everyones gone
your hand in mine
I talk to you
reflecting on our memories
the next day
I cry again
as everyone puts flowers
on your closed casket
then its my turn
once again I stay
after everyones left
I fall on my knees
wishing
I could stay forver
before I know
its dusk
I force myself to stand
I place my yellow rose
on your fresh grave
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-01-10 00:42:27]
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Re: Funeral
(User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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This poem touched me deeply and reflected many memories....I lost a friend and though you may just have wrote this like that,I went through everything described in it.When I lost my friend I placed a yellow rose on her grave,which means freedom and friendship I heard.Everything hit home in your poem,it's truly weird,it's as if you were beside me that day and wrote a poem describing my day.I stayed when ppl left,I cried alone beside her and I stayed beside her for what seemed like a minute but when I got out it was dark.Wonderful poem,I am truly surprised reading it,astonished really.Keep posting,
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Re: Funeral
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:02:59 AM AEST
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Sad....very sad....I know what loosing someone close means and this poem made me remember. Death is devastating for those who remain living and a relief for those who doesn't what an irony!
Anne |
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Re: Funeral
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:49:22 AM AEST
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Sad to lose someone in any way. Excellently expressed emotions that are hidden inside in this write.I liked it. Hope everything will be better soon. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: Funeral
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:24:53 PM AEST
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| whether you have written from a real experience or your vivid imagination, the poem is beautifully real capturing the solom mood of one who has been there, thanx:) hugs n' love nessa |
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