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It's My Life
Contributed by
dudleysgirl
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:24:27 PM in AEST
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Destiny offers no advice.
No platitudes, heartfelt.
Fate deals the telltale cards of life.
We play the hand we’re dealt,
Unravel countless threads of doubt
And pick the lock of time,
Strive to figure ourselves out
And make the pages rhyme.
Ah, that book, it should be sent
With plans we all must face.
(We’re on a mission, so hell bent,
And not a wild goose chase!)
Some of us would welcome it,
Assured we’d get it right.
No fretting ‘bout the sense of it
No losing sleep at night.
No questions asked, no puzzled frown
No second guessing tricks.
Our indecisive quirks outgrown.
No confusion in the mix.
Yes, Fate has good intentions showing,
And some want to grow with ease.
But for me, the fun is in NOT knowing
What she has hidden up her sleeve!
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dudleysgirl
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2004-01-09 22:24:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It's My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mouth on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:02:32 AM AEST (User
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I always worry...Habit I guess. I adrimre your courage. You have direction with no boundries, a road without a map... I hear it is the best way to travel. You are an inspiration in this poem, and a good reminder that life is more fun with less worry about where we are headed...
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Re: It's My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:43:51 AM AEST (User
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Amazing writing skill...And very decriptive
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