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rap it up....
Contributed by
Merry
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:04:27 PM in AEST
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ranting
raving
lunatic
sitting by the backyard fence
chain smoking cigarettes
trying to start the car
so much
promise gone awry
waiting for the moon to rise
clanging banging garbage cans
making music and kicking tires
he wants to stand up
stand up
look his borther in the eye
which one, which one
he never can decide
he wears his underwear outside
outside
talks dirty to the cleaning lady
everybody says he must be crazy
and he laughs out loud all the time
ranting
raving
lunatic
8:16 PM 1/9/2004 gmm
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-01-09 21:04:27]
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Re: rap it up....
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:50:45 AM AEST
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I can hear the rap music in the background..yo yo lol... nice
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Re: rap it up....
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:43:17 AM AEST
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Dear Mer,
Guess there must be one like this in every town somewhere...cussing and swearing...to beat the band.
Underwear showing, and won't even stop when someone comes by. I'm convinced they want the attention! Poor pitiful souls!
You write he best poems Mer.
And always so straightforward and true!
lovingcritters
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Re: rap it up....
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:29:41 AM AEST
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I he was doing that in this neck of the woods he would be greated with a 12 gauge seranade so to speak. lol
Well done
Larry |
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