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A kiss
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 08:08:21 PM in AEST
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When i am yours
And you are mine
I know what is Truely devine
When i am pressed
tightly to your chest
I embrace nirvana
Your touch is bliss
But, oh my love
ecstasy is a kiss
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2004-01-09 20:08:21]
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Re: A kiss
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 08:10:19 PM AEST
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Sooooo Sweeet!! I love this one! It brought a smile to my face :)
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Re: A kiss
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by fallen_eyes on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 08:13:03 PM AEST
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| I agree with Anne, that brought a smile to my face too. I feel it could do to anyones. :) luv ya |
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Re: A kiss
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:06:23 PM AEST
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well done very lovely
Shari |
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Re: A kiss
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by dudleysgirl on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:37:29 PM AEST
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This is very sweet and tender. I do like it very much, but why "nirvana" in L6? I know this as "the extinction of all desires and passions", but I'm no Funk & Wagnall's. :) Would love to know what this means in the context here. I like learning knew things. Also L3: "divine", not "devine". Nice piece. Thanks.
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Re: A kiss
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:44:18 AM AEST
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Lovely..
Jenni |
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Re: A kiss
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by Big_Hugs on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:39:15 AM AEST
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x
there you are!
just a kiss for you, that is such a cute lil poem!
love forever
Katharine
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Re: A kiss
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:57:58 PM AEST
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breathtaking!!
"Your touch is bliss
But, oh my love
ecstasy is a kiss"
~:*exquiste*:~
hugs n' love nessa
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