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Aflower with no petals
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I miss you
I miss you like a branch would it's leaves
like the sky and the sun
like a flower with no petals
I cry without you
I cry without you for this pain in my chest
for the tear rolling down my cheek
for my fallen smile
I need you
I need you here holding me tight
gently kissing my lips
stroking my soft skin
I love you
I love you when you hold my gaze in your eyes
when i hear your voice next to mine
when you find my lost smile
I'll love you always
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fallen_eyes
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2004-01-09 19:29:29]
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Re: Aflower with no petals
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:37:45 PM AEST
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Sweet, loving.......but terribly Sad. Hope your loved one comes back! Beautiful imagery and wording!
Anne |
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Re: Aflower with no petals
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:49:51 PM AEST
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Brilliant tam.. really amazing it really is .. i love your use of imagery in this everything about it sings to me
luv luke |
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Re: Aflower with no petals
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:39:25 AM AEST
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This was great! The imagery, the flow, the sadness, just awesome. You've earned me as a fan. Please, keep posting!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Aflower with no petals
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by Empty_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:43:20 PM AEST
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| hey tam, i feel ur pain. like you jus said ur there for me im always here for you too. another great poem. luv john |
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Re: Aflower with no petals
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:42:20 PM AEST
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| That was incredibly touching. I enjoyed every single word. Very nice. |
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Re: Aflower with no petals
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by Butterat_Zool on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:37:43 PM AEST
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| it's funny how, no matter how many love poems are written, there is always some new way to say how a person feels about a loved one... muy bien... adios., tu amigo, Butterat Zool. |
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