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Why?
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:20:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sunken faces
Fallen eyes
Yet to be taken by suprise
Slowly failing
telling lies
Constent questions asking why
growing weaker
Saying bye
is it your turn soon to cry?
tell the secret
Don't be shy
Don't leave me now asking why
Copyright ©
fallen_eyes
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2004-01-09 19:20:34]
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Re: Why?
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:22:49 PM AEST
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hey pickle welcome to the site he he
ok why have you never shown me this poem is awesome you have such an amazing talent, guess it kinda does fit right now
keep up this kinda writing hun
luv luke |
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Re: Why?
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:23:00 PM AEST
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Very nice flowing and catching. Nice one
Anne :) |
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Re: Why?
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:36:15 AM AEST
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Wow, i'm thoroughly impressed. Reminds me of my own life. I'll most definitely be looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Why?
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by Empty_Soul on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:40:21 PM AEST
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| i'll go with luke on this one why have you never shown us this before! dont hide ur talent from us ur not allowed! amazing write, =) luv john |
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