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Still waiting for you
Contributed by
Necromant
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:16:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When I saw you for the first time,
I immediately wanted to make you mine,
When we danced I sensed so much passion,
Becoming a source of never fading obsession
That night I didn’t need to dream, you became my fantasy,
Lost in the heat, we both reached the peak of our ecstasy,
We were made to fit together; nothing could ever ruin our love,
That’s what I thought at the time, why couldn’t I see that it was all bluff?
You told me it had to became a thing of our past,
You left, disappeared without leaving trace, shattering my heart,
And still I’m waiting here tonight, under the pale moon light,
Trying to catch your sight, and cling to our love with all my might
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Necromant
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2004-01-09 19:16:59]
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Re: Still waiting for you
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by forever_lonely on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:25:06 PM AEST
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sweet.. and so bitter.. perfect
amazing necromat absolutely amazing
all the best
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Re: Still waiting for you
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by Kie on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:14:43 AM AEST
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I've been there so I can definitely relate to this write. Heartache is never a pleasant episode in ones life. You expressed it well.
Kie |
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Re: Still waiting for you
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by gus on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 08:02:35 AM AEST
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optimistic..then sad and longing....really good...hope it has a happy ending for you..:)
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Re: Still waiting for you
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by Merry on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:39:39 PM AEST
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you captured the feelings so perfectly - that one sided love affair - one leaves and the other one is left brokenhearted -
well written
merry |
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Re: Still waiting for you
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:40:32 PM AEST
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| Good write. I agree bittersweet. |
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Re: Still waiting for you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:43:51 PM AEST
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Very empty, that feeling and aching |
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