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A Message from Baby.....
Contributed by
lowman613
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:35:22 PM in AEST
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Hi My name is Leann I heard Mommy say,
She talks to me often,while I'm growing every day!
No one can't yet see me,but soon they will,
and I'll be a little joy,giving them a thrill,
I can't wait to see you all the ones I hear,
The world sounds so big,this is what I fear,
I wsh I could see Mommy & Daddys face,
I know Mommy will dress me in lots of pink lace,
I hear my brothers whom I can't wait to see,
I sure hope that they will love me,
I'm yet to small to peek outside,
but one day I will not hide,
I'll be giving my Mommy a treat,
waking her often so I can eat,
when I need her the most I will cry,
then she will sing me a lulla by,
I know my Mommy will be the best she can be,
because shes been so carring already to me,
I here their voices,but they can't hear mine,
I hope Mommy knows I'm doing just fine,
One day soon they'll touch my hand & face,
I know in their arms is the perfect place!
Leann Ursula Lowman
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Re: A Message from Baby.....
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:41:57 PM AEST
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adorable!! I cant wait!!
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Re: A Message from Baby.....
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 06:08:48 PM AEST
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| Well, I think this is an adorable poem ... and your joy at the impending birth shines through so much ... I truly wish you every happiness in the coming months.... Jan |
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Re: A Message from Baby.....
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by AliB on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:02:33 AM AEST
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Yes I thought this was lovely too, I'm sure these are the things she would say if she could, Well done. I've written a poem you could say to her when she arrives, TO MY SPECIAL BABY,check it out its what I said to my two kids when they were born.
Good luck
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Re: A Message from Baby.....
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:23:09 AM AEST
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Oh Christina this is a lovely poem....one you can read to her and then give her when she is leaving home to have her own little girl.
The latest report on child carrying says that a tiny little infant inside it's Mother can hear all sounds, a Mother's a Voice, a Father's and even her little brothers. You can read to them, and they can even recongize different tunes....so what you are doing is a very loving gesture.....and even if it was way out....it's your poem.....you shouldn't be critized for writing it the WAY you want to write it....it's no one else's business but your own. And if people can't say something nice about our poems...they just pass them by....they don't have to hurt others just because they hurt!
Beautiful poem Christiana
I loved it
and she will too one day!
lovingcritters
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Re: A Message from Baby.....
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by Aika on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:42:08 AM AEST
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Very beautiful, Chris!!!!
SO lovely, I was thinking the same way when I was pregnant:-)
So sensitive:-) A lot of love to you and baby!!!! aika:-)
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