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Why
Contributed by
autumn
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why do you argue
Why do you yell
Why do you push me where i don't want to go
Why am i here
While your over there
Do you even notice or do you even care
Why my life must you control
and why is my future up to you
A home is loving kind and caring
Where i live cannot be a home
For there is no love, no kindness, or care
Holidays should be filled with laughter and joy
But in this house only screams can be heard
In my times of trouble though
you are always there
No matter what has happened
Or what has brought me down
I know to you i can always turn
My Lord, My God
My CHrist above
Copyright ©
autumn
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2004-01-09 12:37:26]
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Re: Why
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:40:59 PM AEST
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| excellent write, your poem has good flow, and great emotional content, keep up the great work |
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Re: Why
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by Audirocker on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:22:31 PM AEST
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| i luv this poem it speaks to people with problems like this. It is a great poem keep writing uhave good talent |
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