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Release me
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:54:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You come to me at night in cover of the moon
You beckon me to follow you to a world unknown
You offer me salvation from my own torment and ruin
You choose me as your friend and lover if only my soul I give
You whisper all my dreams in my ear
You chase all my fears and doubts away
You know just what I need to hear
You read my soul like an open book
You come to me as if a dream
Your touch I feel inside of me
I know you are there though unreal this does seem
I open my eyes but still I cannot see
In the daylight hours I think of all I have to lose
My friends and family both near and far away
Yet even in the light I find you hard to refuse
I also think of all the peace only you can give to me
I cannot see you, yet a face I have given you
Piercing eyes that see right through me
Sensual lips that know just what to do
Skin the color of the night
My decision has been made in the shadows of my mind
I know you are what I have been searching for
I am ready to leave this tragic life behind
Your hand I take as my soul I give
I can now feel your body so close from behind
Your hands wrap around my neck
Soon together as one we will be entwined
As your lips gently graze upon my skin
My head you tilt back and away
As your teeth slowly sink in
For the moment I am your personal buffet
As you drain me of my life, my fears, my desires
With a gentle kiss upon my lip
You cradle me so very near
And offer yourself to me as I begin to sip
All that you have to give
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-01-09 11:54:59]
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Re: Release me
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:02:47 PM AEST
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WoW!!! *speechless* Beautifu! Wonderful very expressive and sensous. I love this one! Great!! Love it!
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Re: Release me
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:05:08 PM AEST
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| That one was really good. I don't even know what to say. Almost speechless. Sheesh. |
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Re: Release me
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:33:58 PM AEST
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| awsome poem, beutiful organization, rhyming and flow. Great poem! Keep up the good work, and keep to emotion flowin |
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Re: Release me
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by Merry on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:43:25 PM AEST
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very haunting and beautiful - enjoyed it very much
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Re: Release me
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by MissTea on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:17:14 PM AEST
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brilliant poem. trashed aside my expectations of that single being by the end of the poem but that was what made it spectacular!!
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Re: Release me
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by Jacktripper on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:27:38 AM AEST
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| You have an excellent style of writting poetry. You had me all the way. I love how you make the third party unknown. Very passionate word play.."My head you tilt back and away" it's beautiful. You make the poetry come alive I can feel every emotion you describe. Well done ... |
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