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Confronting my pain

Contributed by kativette on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:27:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What is pain?
What is to accept?
Why should I accept?

I need to let go.
Let go of my past.
Something that existed
But it’s not coming back.

This is what I choose.
The path I took.
Follow it.
Handle it.

Run, run away, it’s what I know.
Empty, emptiness is what I feel.
Tomorrow what will I be?
Who will I be?

Light, where is my guiding light?
I look around everything dark.
Strength, where has it gone?
Weakness it’s taking over my soul.

“Relax, Relax” is what they say.
"Don’t overwork your fragile heart".
But since I can’t avoid this trial.
I will not be at ease for a while.

And strange enough my sore heart,
It’s telling me from deep inside
That everything it’ll be all right.

Giselle Velez

Copyright Â© kativette ... [ 2004-01-09 11:27:28]
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Re: Confronting my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:37:50 PM AEST
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this has a great tempo in it, wich shows the emotion in it, the way you repeat somewords, helps it flow a little bit faster, I dunno if this is what u wanted to do, but its an excellent write all the same

Re: Confronting my pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:24:41 AM AEST
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The words are really well chosen! The ending:
'And strange enough my sore heart,
It’s telling me from deep inside
That everything it’ll be all right'
Is really great! I like this one!

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