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Sirens Whisper
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:56:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Crimson lips caress
my skin bringing me
to my knees.
All over I feel you on me
wrapped around so tight.
Screaming as your nails
dig deep into my flesh.
Together we meet.
Fully into you I feel
you fluttering intensely
around me.
Your body shudders
as you unleash a flood.
Over me I know
you're here with me.
Feeling you wrapped
tightly against my skin.
Smooth as silk.
Velvet never felt
so damn good.
Sliding through you
I know where I belong.
Rapture that I've
missed far too long.
Knowing that this
was how it was meant
to be forever.
Tasting your nectar
sweetest ever tasted.
Tongues darting over
each other as we
touch and caress.
Could never get enough
of being in you.
Having your lips around
me in pleasure.
Having my tongue
in you writhing.
Early dawn was
no reprieve to us.
Behind you coming.
Loving every second
you like a wild mare
needing to be broken.
Shower left us wanting
writhing in the water.
Your loving the best
I've ever had.
Breaking over me
as I'm coming
deep into you.
The faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-01-09 09:56:39]
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by MissTea on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:16:05 AM AEST
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Very erotic, and very exciting. Sex is something that no-one should be ashamed of, but because of the sick world we live in its been turned into something we sould be frightened of! Brilliant poem, it captures all the passion and love. that where pure sex comes from - LOVE!!
AWESOME
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Jacquelynne on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:16:26 AM AEST
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And you called me naughty...lol
peace and love
jenni |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by mercedes on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:46:08 AM AEST
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| After something like this, are words even necessary? |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:39:12 AM AEST
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| Oh hot hot hot!! *fire extinguisher* (lol check spelling) |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:41:42 AM AEST
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| My my my! Hoooo! Sexy! I must go take a cold shower, back in a sec.............^_^ |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Destiny on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:59:58 PM AEST
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((excuse my language))
*****in write. Openly sexual. I'm more of the type to write sexual poems only as a behind-the-meaning thing |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:11:05 PM AEST
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lol... a lot of women taking a lot of cold showers. I see why. If ya ever make a movie out of this let me know :oP
Hot stuff!!
Larry |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:36:25 PM AEST
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Well I tried to type my comment on your poem four times now and I continually forget what I am typing so I opt to just read the poem again......Smiling
Kie |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:03:45 PM AEST
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Well, you've done it again. You've gotten me all hot and bothered and my stupid boyfriend's not home! Damn you!! You sure have a talent for this kind of thing. Very well done... very well done indeed!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:42:12 AM AEST
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wow... yeah I'd have to agree with Moonlit, your talent shines the most through the erotic. Love when you write like this. :)
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 02:59:03 AM AEST
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Not a good idea for me to read a poem like this, on such a bloody hot day. Now I think I need to add some ice to my cold bath.
Good write though, I enjoyed it ^_^ |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by Manicmuze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:09:58 PM AEST
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Yum... I like this, very sensual and erotic, has strong yearning and desire pulsating through this.
Nicely done, enjoyed much,
~ Wendy |
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Re: Sirens Whisper
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by norm on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:40:32 PM AEST
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I'll tell you what I think..
-----------------------------------
At 28 it's not too late
for me to try to emilate,
At 82 It's not too late
To take on out my partial plate...
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