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Together; it's warmer now...
Contributed by
scott_milton
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 08:36:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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A ticket of warmth streams
From your hand; clammed fist.
You shake,
I boom accordingly.
Eyes fall back into the womb-
oxygen is shaved, cutting my lip.
Quietly before I was born,
trees think of you and fall out your mouth completely
Beginning it all again…
Black, blue and then suddenly awake!
Hair!
Huh?
Feet!
Who?
nutrition!
Together; it’s warmer now…
My shell hasn’t heard the sea.
She’s been in trees,
Hiding out my eyes splendid torque of gather.
Faded newspapers for the
Welcome back,
We’ve enough cameras now to ***** up kids,
Ahem! ….outliving the sidewalk.
It’s your bird
Your shoulder
When my cloud dies from lack of sky
And falls
we all taste the difference
Blind people read the droplets of rain
People don’t step over the line
My sober stall of light breaks limits
Without announcement!
Why can’t you take thinking seriously?
Seriously there’s profanity in circles...
Copyright ©
scott_milton
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2004-01-09 08:36:25]
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Re: Together; it's warmer now...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:07:47 AM AEST
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This is one of the better poems i've read on this site, very original use of language and your imagery is thought-provoking and makes me sah "ahhhhh" :)
I especially like;
" It’s your bird
Your shoulder
When my cloud dies from lack of sky
And falls
we all taste the difference"
Excellent work, your style and voice are intriguing, I will check out more of your poetry.
A pleasure,
~ Wendy
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Re: Together; it's warmer now...
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 02:18:39 AM AEST
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Terrific A Masterpiece :-)
Loved It.....Please Keep Em Coming
It Was A Pleasure To Read This Poem.....Great Write
,,,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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