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Life (A bit dark and sad)
Contributed by
Necromant
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:03:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Life is such difficult theme,
Every now and then you feel like you want to scream,
Most of the days you feel so alone,
Because this isn’t the fate you chose for your own,
Decisions are hard to take,
It’s your future at the stake!
Most of my decisions turned out to be a big mistake,
I’ve made choices, that lead me to my current state of hate,
Others where ripped away from me,
They even chose who I was to be!,
Now I only live through false pretence,
Hope and strength have abandoned me, I’m left without defence.
Anger, Bitterness, Coldness, are my only true friends,
Never failing to show up when the occasion presents,
Unfriendly voices in my head are all I hear,
Maybe if I listen to them my loneliness will disappear,
And so with a blade in my hands I make a hesitant cut,
Crimson blood runs down my arm, why doesn’t it hurt?
My body screams -Betrayal!-; my soul cries for redemption,
The voices are cheering, cutting all the way without any exception,
Unwanted tears slide down my face, the metallic smell of blood fills the air,
Lost is my entity, my hand is beyond any hope of repair,
And so I live everyday hiding in myself, smiling and joking,
While during the night I’m falling, hating, dying-hoping...
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-01-09 07:03:48]
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Re: Life (A bit dark and sad)
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by icryblacktearz on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:48:50 AM AEST
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Wow. amazing, i can actually feel what you are feeling.. great peom! but dont always hide behind the smiles and the laughing.
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Re: Life (A bit dark and sad)
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 11:38:05 AM AEST
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great poem. I hope you get through whateva bad times your living through soon. Feeling pain is terrible, living with it is hell. Try to find your way out, its your only chance to live your life with happiness.
Alec Fernandez
(Opened to many scars, Opened to many wounds, now I suffer more) |
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Re: Life (A bit dark and sad)
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:19:47 PM AEST
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You expressed yourself very well in your poem and several lines called out to me. I am impressed.
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Re: Life (A bit dark and sad)
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:20:40 PM AEST
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| It broke into song in my head. Pretty good write. |
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Re: Life (A bit dark and sad)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 05:25:20 PM AEST
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Know exactly where your coming from a great write!
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Re: Life (A bit dark and sad)
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:24:59 PM AEST
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| Learn to let go a bit here and there, and put things in order....you are much stronger than what you think yourself to be. |
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