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My mistake
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:53:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Take me back to the life is missed out on
Back to the one I loved
I thought I could change it
I thought I could bring you back
I tryed to right the wrong
And rewrite the memories I lost
I wanted to take back what I left behind
And pretend like it was all just a faint dream, I forgot about
I never thought I'd lose you
I made a mistake, I'm sorry I wasn't there
I'm sorry I couldn't change things back to the life we once lived,
I guess everything just went wrong
I miss you, I wish I could change the things that happened, and now life's just a bloody
nightmare without you.
Copyright ©
youngpoet1989
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2004-01-09 02:53:48]
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Re: My mistake
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:05:01 AM AEST
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| Good poem. I can relate. Keep writing, and dont be afraid to fall in-love again. |
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Re: My mistake
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by bernard on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:51:08 AM AEST
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| Sad, But remember every cloud has a silver lining. bern |
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Re: My mistake
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by ToriVeigh on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:58:35 AM AEST
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| You never know what the future may hold. Don't stop hoping. Great write. |
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Re: My mistake
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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Love will come knocking at your door... Juat wait... (Which happens to be the hardest thing ever)
Take care, ok?
David |
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